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Works in Progress: Table of Stone and Forged in Fire, Week Eight (and a little)

I’m a bit late this week, I know. It’s been busy, and I spent most of last weekend out of the house. No house, no laptop. No laptop, not much writing.

If not much = zero, that is. I got no writing done this past weekend.

Planting, though. That I did get done. We went down to the annual plant sale at the local botanical gardens, and I kinda shopped. A lot. Which meant I did some gardening. There are pictures on my Instagram.

As for writing,  I focused a bit more on Table of Stone this past week. Still not quite where I want it to be, but I’ll get there. It’s not a race, although there is a deadline. It needs to be done before Oasis at the end of May.

Table of Stone
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 4

Forged in Fire
Heir to the Firstborn, Book 2

 I posted part of this on social media this past week, because every so often, I write something that just can’t wait for publication to be read. Here’s the scene, which I don’t think is spoilery. Much.

***

“There’s a king under the mountain myth about Charlemagne,” Margaret repeated. “And there’s only one. All the others, there’s some debate over which mountain. But when it’s the myth about Charlemagne, it’s only ever one place. Untersberg. It’s between Bavaria and Salzburg.”

Mystere frowned. “Tell me this story. I assume you know it?”

“Of course,” Margaret answered. “I’ve no expertise in mythology, but I know the legends and lore about Charlemagne, thanks to my father. Charlemagne sleeps under the mountain, waking every hundred years. If the ravens are still flying over the mountain, then he goes back to sleep.”

“What do the ravens mean?” Mystere asked. “What happens if they’re not flying?”

“According to the legends, if the ravens fly away, it signals the end of the world, and Charlemagne will rise to fight in the final battle.” Margaret looked down at her skirts, pleating them between her fingers. “When I was researching with my father, we looked for other variations on the myth. There are almost always regional variations. Except for this one. This one is the same where ever it’s told.”

Mystere nodded slowly. He cocked his head to one side. “Salzburg, you said. That’s… what? Five, six hundred miles?” He whistled. “Is there a train?”

“It’s a myth!” Margaret protested. “Yael, you’re not suggesting that we go haring off across the continent, are you?”

He looked at her and smiled. “I did promise that if I went haring, I would be taking you with me. And we don’t necessarily have to hare. We could traipse. We might have to traipse, depending on the weather and on if there’s a train.”

***

Now, of course, I need to find out if there is a train!

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Works in Progress: Table of Stone and Forged in Fire, Week 7.

It occurred to me just now that every other time that I’ve done a WIP accountability post before this one, I’ve numbered them by what week it was.  So I went back and counted. This is week seven.

Table of Stone
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 4

Forged in Fire
Heir to the Firstborn, Book 2

I’m going to need to do some catching up on Table of Stone, it looks like.

Had a good writing week. The big reveal in Table of Stone happened (no spoilers, but it’s a scene I’ve been waiting to write since book ONE.) We have a new Companion in Forged in Fire (no spoilers there, either. If you want to know before August, you can come join me on Patreon, where we’re up to chapter five.)

Initial reviews on Written in Water have been excellent, and sales are going well. I will have copies with me at Oasis in May, now that I’ve gotten the cover issues straightened out.

Now, it’s already getting harder to find an unspoilery excerpt. Have a bit from Table of Stone, one that had me scrambling because this reading was also not in my outline.

***

“Cameron!”

The door opened, and Mister Cameron entered, his face pale. He’d changed back into his livery, although given the late hour, he’d left off the ascot. “Master.”

“Fetch your second deck. I want a three card reading,” Mystere said. Cameron came into the room, and reached into his coat pocket, taking out a bundle.

“I thought you might be asking, Master.” He handed the bundle to Mystere. “If you would, sir?”

“You didn’t have me shuffle the cards,” Margaret said as she watched Mystere toss the cards from hand to hand.

“I thought it best to keep your magic out of it entirely, my lady,” Cameron replied. “For your safety. I was correct in that, I think.” He took the shuffled cards back from Mystere and laid out three cards, all face down. Mystere reached across the table and turned the first card over to reveal the King of Clubs. He nodded, then turned over a second card. He frowned.

“The Knave of Hearts. Fletcher?”

“An unselfish relative, or a good friend,” Cameron answered.

“That… leaves me with more questions than it answers,” Mystere muttered. He turned over the last card, and both brows rose.

The card was blank.

“Fletcher, this is like before,” Margaret said. “The other deck had two Kings of Spades.”

“And this one…Fletcher, what card should this have been?”

Cameron counted out the rest of the cards, the cardstock snapping as he laid them on the table. Margaret counted along with him, then watched as he sorted them into suits. He frowned, and so did Mystere.

“There are no cards missing,” Cameron said. “The rest of my deck is intact. That card… shouldn’t be here.”

“And yet it is,” Mystere murmured. He sat back, holding the card up and studying it for a moment. “Quickly, what does a blank card mean?”

“Possibilities,” Cameron answered, while at the same time Margaret said, “Beginnings.”

Mystere nodded, still studying the card. All at once, his face went blank. His mouth hung lax for a moment, as a swell of magic like harpstrings rang through the room.

Begin at the beginning.

***

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Works in Progress: Table of Stone and Forged in Fire

Table of Stone
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 4

Forged in Fire
Heir to the Firstborn, Book 2

Had a busy week this week, both in terms of writing and in terms of promotions. I posted about playing with memes, although I didn’t post the last of the set.

This quote is the source of the title of Written in Water. We’ll come back to that theme in later books.

There was also a bit of research into Victorian cartomancy this week. I wasn’t planning on having a character do any sort of card reading, but the words flowed out of my fingers. So I stopped and started researching, only to find that someone reading cards in Victorian England might very well be reading regular playing cards, not tarot. So I went with it, and found a reference on what the cards would mean, and how to do a reading.  So we’ll have an excerpt of that tonight.

Cameron is the butler in Margaret and Douglas’ household, and is first introduced at the very end of book 2.

***

Cameron looked momentarily nervous. “You know I practice, correct?”

“I know that everyone in this house practices, and that Mister Mystere taught most of you,” Margaret answered. He nodded

“My practice is a bit on the eclectic side. We have a coven, and I do some divination work. So I’d like to draw cards, if I may,” he said.

“Draw cards?” Margaret looked at the box. “Oh! You practice cartomancy?”

His brows rose. “You know of it?”

“I’ve read a little, but I’ve never seen a tarot deck before.”

Cameron smiled. “I don’t use a tarot deck. I use a regular deck. It’s harder to be charged with vagrancy if you might very well be playing Snap.” He opened the box and took out a deck of normal seeming cards. “These are my cards. You may look, if you like.”

Margaret took the cards from him, and felt an odd, fleeting tingle in her palms as the cardstock touched her fingers. She spread out the cards, then frowned. “They aren’t all here.”

Cameron picked up the deck and drew one card, then shuffled the rest together. “That’s because for divination, I only need the cards from seven to ten, and the royal cards.” He laid the deck down, then set the single card face up on the table. The King of Clubs.

“That’s Doctor Keith’s card,” he said. “It means an honest, liberal man, one who is loyal to his friends and his family.”

Margaret smiled. “That’s my Broc,” she murmured. “What would my card be?”

Cameron studied her for a moment. “The Queen of Clubs,” he answered. “A loving woman, but fierce in her temper, especially when her family is concerned.”

Margaret laughed. “That does sound like me. Now what do we do? Will you explain as you go?”

Mister Cameron shuffled the remaining cards, then laid them out face down in three columns — three cards to the left of Douglas’ card, one above his, one below his, and three cards to the right. Cameron laid the rest of the cards aside.

“This is a very simple reading,” he said. He tapped the left column. “The past.” He touched the middle column. “The present.” He touched the last column. “And the future.” He turned over the card at the top of the first column. “The Nine of Diamonds. Roving in other lands.” The next card revealed the Ace of Diamonds. He smiled. “This means a wedding. With regards to the journey, I would presume to say that they combine to mean the journey to Germany, where the Doctor and the Master met you. And a better journey they’ve never taken, nor are likely to take again.”

“You’re a flatterer, Mister Cameron. Do go on,” Margaret teased. She leaned forward as best she could, watching as Cameron turned over the card at the base of the column. He frowned.

“The King of Spades. An enemy to be feared was also discovered on that journey.”

Margaret nodded. “Caedda.”

Mister Cameron took a deep breath. “Now, for the present.” He turned over the topmost card, then gasped, “Good Lord!”

“Mister Cameron?” Margaret asked slowly. “Why does your deck have two Kings of Spades?”

“It doesn’t,” Cameron answered. “My lady—”

***

And I’ll leave that there!

On other fronts, this week I was invited back to Necronomicon to be a guest again. This will be in Tampa in October. So that give me three chances this year to be out and about and meeting people!

One week and two days before Written in Water releases! There have been some lovely reviews on the ARC over on Goodreads, and I’m really on pins and needles waiting for the book to drop. I posted the picture of the paperback last night, and I eventually do need someone to tell me how much is TOO much for an author to pet their new book.

Not yet, though.

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Work in Progress: Ashes and Light, week seven

Ashes and Light
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 3

43796 / 85000 (51.52%)

Half a book! Woohoo!

Things have been going really well on all fronts. I made my weekly words last night, so there was no writing done today. I made my monthly goals in the FFPRWA Monthly Challenge. It’s been a successful week all around.

In Ashes and Light, we now have a villain. Well, we’ve always had a villain, but now he’s on-screen, as it were. Here’s the grand entrance, with a little explanation. A church grim is a black dog that heralds a death, and it was not invented by JK Rowling.  They’re part of old English folklore.

We’re once again at the place in the story where it’s going to get harder to post excerpts without also posting spoilers.  I think I’ve avoided major ones in this week’s excerpt, though.

***

They made their way through the dark streets, listening for any sound that might be another church grim, and testing at crossings for the right path. It felt to Douglas as if they’d been walking for hours when Gerald stumbled and nearly fell.

“Gerald?”

“I’m sorry, Doctor,” Gerald said. He shook his head. “I’m knackered. I can’t remember ever being this tired before.” He reached into his pocket and took out his pocket-watch, tipping it to try and read it by the light from Hauteclere’s emerald. He blinked, raised the watch to his ear, then looked at Douglas. “Doctor? What time did we come up here?”

“Around seven. Why?”

“Because it’s past two.” Gerald listened to the watch once more. “And this is ticking, so it’s not run down.”

“Wind it again,” Douglas said, looking around. “I’m a fool, Gerald. You warned me about the confusions spells, and I should have taken precautions. We’ve been blundering around like drunkards for hours.” He looked at the sword. “And you couldn’t have done something about that?” he asked, and the emerald dimmed in response.

“Doctor?” Gerald said slowly. “Are you talking to your sword?”

“And I’ve apparently embarrassed it.” Douglas looked around. “I’ve no idea if we’re close to Mrs. Keith or not. And I don’t want to shout. In this place, it would sound like a riot.” He sighed and looked at Hauteclere again. “Let’s try this again, shall we? And this time, let’s do something about the spells, hm?”

The emerald flickered, flared alarmingly bright, then went dark. Magic flared all around them, leaving Douglas dazzled for a moment. A moment too long.

“What—”

Gerald’s voice trailed off as growling came from all around them. Douglas swore softly and threw shields up around himself and Gerald, then set a mage-light floating overhead. It revealed what Hauteclere had tried to warn him of — they were surrounded by church grims. There were five of them, and as Douglas watched, a sixth one appeared out of nowhere.

“Well, now,” a familiar voice crooned. “Visitors. How nice.”

***

I still haven’t decided on the final order of the chapters. I have time — the book is only half done!

In Heir to the Firstborn, the words didn’t come quite as fast as last week. Instead of 8K words, I wrote just over 4K. I’m into chapter 13 now, and Owyn’s backstory. Aven and Aria have been sheltered. Owyn has not.  This starts in the middle of one of his lines.

***

“…So… that’s me. Orphan, thief, whore, slave.”

“Smith. Smoke Dancer,” Aven said.

“Companion,” Aria added, her voice firm. “In case you were thinking I’d change my mind about that last, once I knew.”

“You’re serious?” Owyn asked. “You really mean that? You still want me? After everything? I mean, I’m a marked criminal, and a slave. Mem, he treats me like his son, but I’m not, and I know it. I’m his slave.”

Aven slid his arm around Owyn and pulled him tight to his side. “Owyn, do you know what the Water tribe says about success and failure?”

Owyn’s brow furrowed. “No, I don’t think I’ve seen that in any of my books.”

“My mother says that the Mother has a ledger where she makes note of all of the deeds of all of her children. The successes, the times we come out ahead, she writes in ink.”

Owyn nodded. “And the failures?”

“She writes in water.”

Aria blinked. Then she smiled. “I like that.”

“I don’t understand,” Owyn protested. “If you write them in water, then when the paper dries, the marks… oh.” He stopped. “Oh. Really?”

“Really.” Aven turned, and found himself nose to nose with Owyn once more. “It’s written in water, Owyn.”

Owyn smiled slightly. “And all over the skin of my back.”

“You’re being obtuse,” Aven protested. “Your past is written in water. It happened, we know. It was written in the Mother’s ledger. But knowing it doesn’t mean we want you any less.”

***

The theme of failures being written in water will be coming up again in Heir to the Firstborn, and it’s all because of Van Canto. I own this album, but I hadn’t listened to this one song until it came up on Spotify. And it immediately became Aven’s song.

Tomorrow is the First of Halloween. A new month, with new goals.  I’ll be a guest at Necronomicon the weekend of October 19-21st, which means there will be very little writing done that weekend. If you’re in the area, I’ll be on several panels that weekend, and will be signing books on Saturday morning at 11AM. Come see me!

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Work in Progress: Ashes and Light, Week 1

Ashes and Light
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 3

7212 / 85000 (8.48%)
Not bad for a first week. I hadn’t realized that I was missing Margaret and Douglas until I dove back into their world. two chapters in, not sure how many more are to come.

 

There was also over 6K words written on Heir to the Firstborn, which is humming along nicely. I just dropped my first mountain on my MC. It’s a little one. There are bigger ones to come. (teehee — for mine is an evil writer laugh!)

 

I do have to say I’m enjoying having more time to write. And working on two projects at the same time isn’t as difficult as I thought it might be. Which is good, because I am really enjoying both projects, and I don’t want to have to put one aside to focus on the other. Now, having said that, I will probably put Heir on hold when I get my next set of edits in. Two projects at once is going well. Two projects and edits might be too much. We’ll see.

 

Now, I did the last couple of book tracking posts with excerpts.  So I should do excerpts for this one, too.  Here’s the beginning of chapter one of Ashes and Light:

 

***
Mid-August, and the Season was over for the year. The worst of the summer heat was passing, and the worst of the London crowds had retreated to country estates, not to be seen again in London until February. Not that Margaret cared much about the Season. She’d never been of that level of society, where social connections and rank were considered paramount. Being studied and judged, like a butterfly pinned to a card, made her deeply uncomfortable. Going to the theatre, or the Opera, to dinner parties or balls or any of the other normal evening diversions were, in her mind, poor choices when compared to staying at home and exploring what Douglas had called her belated morning-gift — the extensive library that he and Yael Mystere had accumulated over the years in the London townhouse that Margaret now shared with her husband.

 

The only thing better would have been if Mystere had been there to share it with them.

 

Margaret sighed and glanced up and down the street before crossing to the far side. It had been four months since they’d last seen Mystere. Four  months without any word, any signs that he lived. Knowing what she now knew about him, about Douglas, and the life that she’d once shared with them so many years ago, she doubted that he was dead. Especially since death was something that Mystere seemed to recover from remarkably well. But having him disappear like this had gone from puzzling to alarming to terrifying — where was he? He’d told them that the next sword — his own sword, Almace — was here in London. He’d sent them ahead, promised to follow them. But he hadn’t, and it had been four months.

 

Margaret stopped and resettled the long strap of her satchel on her shoulder. Usually, the duties of the lady of the house included paying calls in an afternoon, making the endless social rounds of forced niceties and simpering conversations about who was doing what with whom, and the shocking prices of whatever the delicacy of the moment might be. Douglas had introduced her to several of his colleagues at the hospital, and to their wives. She could very well call on them, if she was so inclined. But today was Friday, and many of those wives were assisting in their husband’s clinics today. It would hardly do to show up at their doors and expected to be entertained.

 

So, on Fridays, Margaret paid no social calls. Instead, she paid intellectual ones — visiting the Reading Room of the British Museum, searching through antique bookstores, trying to find any reference that she could on the Wardens. On the swords. On where Mystere could possibly have hidden Almace. The sword was in holy ground, Mystere had told them. It was a starting point, and one that had left Margaret dizzy with the discovery of just how many places within the borders of London could be considered holy ground. Still, she researched, and every false trail, every failed turn only strengthened her determination to tease loose the strands of the puzzle that Mystere had left them with. Caedda and his quest to possess all four swords was never far from her thoughts, making her work all that more urgent. Inside her satchel were copies of her notes, written in a amalgam of Old High German, Old Low Franconian, both East and West, Latin, Greek and Aramaic, which she had then forced through a filter of Pittman shorthand. Perhaps Mystere could have puzzled them out, but she was certain in her bones that no one else would be able to. And she wasn’t entirely certain that Mystere knew Pittman shorthand.

 

Those notes documented the locations of every square inch of holy ground that existed inside the boundaries of London of a thousand years before, collected from maps and tax records and entries in countless diaries. Every Friday, she added to that list — perhaps one, perhaps six, which she then added to the map that was locked away in the workroom that she shared with Douglas. And every Saturday, she and Douglas went searching, hunting for those locations, hoping against hope that this time, they would find Almace.

 

Four months of searching, and all for naught. There were no traces of Almace. And still, no traces of Yael Mystere.
She turned from Westmoreland Street onto Wheatley, and crossed the quiet street toward Wesley and home. As she turned the corner, she stopped.

 

There was someone sitting on the steps of the townhouse.

 

No. No, that wasn’t right. There was a small figure slumped on the steps of the townhouse. And even from this distance, she could see the growing stain beneath them.

 

Douglas, there’s someone bleeding out on the steps!
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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week nine

A good week, this. I can see the halfway point from here.

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

 I’ve jumped back in time again, so I’ve spent this week writing my favorite characters. The sheer amount of giddy enjoyment I get from Turpin, Roland and Olivier is probably illegal in my home state.

So here’s some of Turpin and Olivier. A few lines of this showed up in my Twitter feed this week.

***

He (Turpin) took his midday meal with Ganelon, who asked for him to take the time to discuss methods of more effective deployment for the scouting parties. That topic was never discussed — Ganelon spent the meat casting aspersions on his step-son, slandering Roland as a degenerate wastrel who was unworthy of the Archbishop’s tutelage, all the while promoting the virtues of his own son, Baudoin and all but insisting that Turpin cast Roland aside in favor of Baudoin. Turpin came away from the meal deeply disgusted, suffering with indigestion, and with the solid certainty that Ganelon would never see his step-son as anything more than a nuisance. Turpin made note to speak to Charles about his brother-in-law — perhaps there was a border province somewhere in Charles’ realm that would be a better use of Ganelon’s talents, or at least a place for him to spray his venom as far as possible from his intended victim. Someplace in Frisia, perhaps? No… no, Frisia was entirely too close to Aachen, and Turpin liked the villa at Aachen far too much.

He walked the perimeter of the camp, thinking of geography and borders, and how they might be able to convince the Pope that the mountains of the moon were within Charles’ realm, and were therefore a perfectly logical place to send Ganelon. He was mentally composing the letter when he reached his own tent, and almost tripped on Olivier.

“Oh!” Turpin stepped back and laughed. “Olivier, I apologize. I was thinking—”

“You were leagues away is what you were,” Olivier said. “What are you thinking about, to be paying no attention? That’s not like you.”

“Thinking about how we might go about annexing the mountains of the moon for Francia.”

Olivier blinked. “I… can you do that?”

“I’ve no idea,” Turpin admitted. “But I think it might be far enough away to send Ganelon.”

Olivier blinked again. Then he looked thoughtful. He frowned, then murmured, “Tartarus.”

“What?” Turpin gasped, suddenly colder than he’d been in a very long time. “What about Tartarus?”

“Hesiod said it would take nine days for an anvil that fell from Heaven to reach the Earth. And it would take nine more days to reach Tartarus. How fast does an anvil fall? Faster than a horse travels, I should think. Is that far enough?”

Turpin swallowed. “Far enough, certainly. But I’d not sentence anyone to Tartarus. Not even Ganelon.”

“Turpin?” Olivier sounded worried. “Are you all right? You’re very pale all of a sudden.”

“An ill wind,” Turpin answered. He looked around. “Where have you been all day?”

“Thinking. Trying to get my thoughts in order. What is it that Roland says? Chasing my next thought.” Olivier smiled slightly. “He was right, this morning. I’ve been being awful.”

“Come and dine with me,” Turpin said. “And we can talk about it. Have your thoughts given you a reason for your behavior?”

“I think I’m closer than I was,” Olivier admitted. “And if you hadn’t asked me, I’d have asked you. I already spoke to the cooks.”

Turpin nodded. “Then come inside. We’ll have something to drink, and we’ll talk. You haven’t told me about your family in ages.”

He led Olivier into the tent, going to the chest where he kept his personal stores of wine.

“Shouldn’t I be doing that?” Olivier asked.

“You should be sitting,” Turpin answered. “And tell me about how things are with Gismonda and the boys.” He picked up cups and took them and a flask to the table, sitting down facing Olivier. Olivier took the cup that Turpin offered and took a sip.

“They’re doing well. When we go back to Francia, I should go and visit them. She tells me that Aquilante is getting tall, that he’ll be a tall man when he’s grown.” He smiled. “He’ll be taller than me, I warrant.”

“Your father was tall, was he not?”

“He was,” Olivier agreed. “You met him, didn’t you?”

“Once or twice only,” Turpin said. He sipped his own wine. “Years back. You would have been a little boy. Aquilante’s age, I think.”

Olivier sniffed. “Master, how old are you? Really?”

Turpin chuckled. “Old enough that I’m not even certain myself. Old enough that I should know more than I do.”

“Do we ever know everything we should know?” Olivier asked.

“Oh, I like that question!” Turpin leaned back in his chair and took a drink. “That’s very good. One could argue that we never know all we should know, because how do we know what we don’t know?”

Olivier looked as if he wanted to answer. Then he stopped and frowned. “I think I haven’t had enough wine to answer that.”

***

There are times when the writing just flows from my fingertips. This has been that kind of week. Here’s hoping for another one — I’d like to see a completed draft by the end of June.

Let’s recap the words so far —

Nine weeks, 41, 743 words.
Average of 662.5 words a day. Call it 663 words. That’s low for me, but there was Spring Break in there.

It’s ten weeks until the end of June. 76 days. If I keep my numbers at 750 words a day or more, I’ll make that deadline.

In other news, I’m still thinking of that Elemental thing, but it’s back burner for a bit. I’m scribbling things down as I think of them, but it’s very low priority. Gee, I wonder why? (looks pointedly at the calendar….)

 

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week seven

My word counter is back!

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

Just about a third of a book. Still fussing a little with the format — where in time should it start, how much time should I spend in one era before we go to the other. Things are pretty fluid right now.

I’m trying to keep that other thing in mind and get a handle on that while working on this one — still not idea what that OTHER thing is. All I know so far is that the hero is a merman, you can tell by looking at him because you can see the marks of where his gills are on his throat when he’s in his human form, and that firemice live in the blacksmith’s forge.

All of this has nothing to do with Charlemagne. I know.

Right. Excerpt time.

***

He reached up and took her hands, drawing them down to where he could kiss both of her palms. “Margaret. My Margaret. D’ye know what your name is, in Gaelic?”

She smiled. “No, I don’t.”

“Marsaili,” he answered. “It means pearl.”

“I knew that,” Margaret told him. “It’s from the Greek, I think.”

“You don’t care for Maisie, and I understand that.” Douglas sat back on his heels, not letting go of her hands. “Might I call you Marsaili? When we’re alone?”

She moved to perch on the edge of the chair. “You may call me Marsaili whenever you like. I like it, and I like the sound of you saying it. Just between us?”

“A secret name. Just for us.”

She giggled. “All right. Do I get a secret name just for you?”

He looked thoughtful. “I can’t think of another name I’d answer to, other than Doogie.”

“Do you have a second name?”

He blinked. “Do you? I never asked. And I don’t remember if you wrote it on the marriage certificate.”

“I do, but I’ve never cared for it at all,” Margaret answered. “It’s Winifred.”

Douglas nodded slowly. “So… I don’t get to call you Winnie, then?”

“No, you do not. I like Marsaili. What do I call you?”

“My second name is Malcolm, but I’d rather you didn’t use it,” he shifted, letting her hands go and sitting tailor fashion on the floor in front of her. “My son was Malcolm.”

“I remember,” Margaret said. “Calling you Doctor seems very impersonal.” She frowned. “You have a clan, don’t you? Since you’re a Scot?”

“Of course. Clan Keith.”

“And don’t the clans all have animals associated with them? I should know this now, shouldn’t I? Since I’m Clan Keith by marriage?”

“Clan Keith has a badger,” Douglas answered. “Where are you going with this?”

Margaret laughed. “A badger? That’s perfect. And the Scottish word for badger is what?”

Douglas smiled. “It’s broc. Is that what you’ll be calling me now?”

“Broc? If you like it. I think it suits you.” Margaret smiled.

“How so?” Douglas asked.

“In the stories of Reynard the Fox, Badger is Reynard’s cousin. He’s a philistine, which doesn’t suit you at all. But he also loves his home, his family, and he loves his comforts. And don’t surprise him, because he can be quite dangerous.” Margaret was rewarded with a real smile.

“I think I like it.” He shifted around until he was kneeling once more. “We’ve a day or two, don’t we?”

“That’s what Yael said,” Margaret answered.

“They, my lovely Marsaili,we’re going to use that time to our advantage,” Douglas said. He got to his feet and held his hand out to Margaret. “Go dress to go out,” Douglas said. He got to his feet and held his hand out to Margaret.

“Out? Out where?” She took his hand and let him pull her to her feet. To her surprise, he pulled her closer, holding her to him with one arm while he brushed her hair back with his other hand.

“Well, I’m realizing that I barely know you,” Douglas said. “And, since hope that we’ll be married for a very long time, I should get to know you better. And you should know me. So I want you to show me Paris, the way you see it. You’ve spent a lot of time in this city, yes?”

“Yes,” Margaret agreed. She rested her hand on Douglas’ chest. “Does that mean we’re courting?”

“We’re a little backwards, but yes. We should have done it sooner, but we were distracted. Now, he’ll call us in a day or two, and until then, we’ll come to know each other.” He looked so earnest, so eager for her approval, that she had to smile. She went onto her toes and kissed Douglas gently on the lips.

“I like that. Let me go change.”

They took supper in a restaurant near the Louvre that Margaret had always gone to with her father, then she took him walking along the Seine.

“Tomorrow, we’ll see the Louvre,” she told him, taking his arm. “And anything else you want to see. The Tower, perhaps?”

“You decide,” Douglas answered.

That set the tone for the next day, and the day after that. They toured the Louvre, and had coffee and pastries in the pâtisserie in the Eiffel Tower. As they strolled through the Champ de Mars, Douglas flagged down a flower seller, and presented Margaret with a single red rose.

“I like this courting business,” Margaret said, taking his arm. He laughed, and she marveled at how relaxed he seemed.

“I’m enjoying it,” he said. “Shall we do this often, Marsaili?”

“Courting?” Margaret sniffed her rose. “Yes, please. I’m feeling very spoiled right now.”

“Shall I spoil you further?” he asked. She smiled, and he led her toward the street and one of the many horse-drawn carts for hire there.

They entered their suite, and no sooner had Margaret locked the door behind them then Douglas had come up behind her and wrapped his arms around her.

“Shall I spoil you further?” he repeated. “In the bedroom?”

 

 

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week 3

So, my muse is a toddler. I can say this with good authority, being that I had one of those.

Me: “Okay, it’s time to write!”

Muse: “Yay! Vampires!”

Me: “What? No. No vampires. Not yet.”

Muse: “No vampires?”

Me: “No. Roland and Turpin. You like them, right?”

Muse: “Want vampires!”

Me: “Vampires later. Roland now.”

Muse: “Donwanna…”

In other words? This week has been a bit of a slogfest. I’m a little behind where I should be, but not too terribly much.

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

And, I happily have enough written that I can give an excerpt!

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Turpin looked up from the book he was reading — he’d dragged a chair out of his tent to sit in a honeysuckle-scented breeze. June in Pavia was really quite pleasant. Not too warm. Not too cold. The spring rains were over, and the hills and forests were lush and green, alive with birds and flowers. Somewhere off in the distance, he could hear swordplay and the laughter of young men. Yes, it was quite nice.

It would be even better if they weren’t encamped outside the walls, with the city under siege. He closed the book and sighed, rubbing his forehead. Somewhere in that city was Desiderius, the father of Charles’ former wife. The man had never struck Turpin as being an idiot, but he had to have known that Charles, as devout as he was, would raise his armies in answer to a threat to the Pope. Which brought them to Pavia. They’d been chasing Desiderius across Italy, and now there was a chance of ending this. If they managed to last longer than the town, that was.

“Turp!”

Turpin turned in his chair and smiled as the dark-haired young man came toward him. “No swordplay for you, my student?”

“Bored with it,” Roland answered as he came to sit on the ground at Turpin’s feet. He leaned his shoulder against Turpin’s knee and looked up. “I finished the reading you gave me. Read it twice. I don’t really understand it, though. Do you have another treatise I can read that might explain it?”

“Did you discuss it with Olivier as I instructed?” Turpin asked. Roland didn’t answer. Instead, he tipped his head against Turpin’s thigh.

“I didn’t, Master,” he admitted. But there was something more.

Roland? Is there a problem?” Turpin asked silently.

I don’t know. I know you told me to talk to Olivier, that he could share his insight. And I tried. I did. I think he’s avoiding me. And when he can’t avoid me, he won’t answer my questions,” Roland answered. “He’s very polite, but asking him anything about our studies is like asking a wall.” He paused, then sighed. “It feels like— like the end of some of the relationships I’ve had. Someone who wants me gone, or wants to be gone, but doesn’t know how to tell me.

“It’s not his to say,” Turpin said aloud. “And I’ll tell him that myself. When did this start?”

Roland swallowed and looked up. “It started before we left Francia.”

“And you didn’t say anything?”

“I thought it was something I’d done. That I could fix it.”

Turpin nodded. “You were going to say something else. You compared it to the end of a relationship, but that’s not what you were going to say.

The way that Olivier has started treating me feels the same as the way that Ganelon has acted towards me my entire life.” Roland’s mental voice was small, and pain-filled. “I don’t understand why.”

“Nor do I. But I’ll find out,” Turpin said. He frowned, thinking. Olivier had been more quiet than usual since the Frankish army had answered the Pope’s call. He’d been spending less time in Turpin’s tent, discussing his lessons and reading the books that he needed to advance his studies as a Warden. And his presence as Turpin’s aide had become a much more infrequent thing. Turpin had dismissed it at the time — they were further from home than his students had ever been, and he’d assumed that Olivier was missing his wife and his sons. But now he wondered if that was all. “I’ll talk to him,” he said. He reached out and rested his hand on Roland’s head, then gently stroked his hair. Roland shivered, a wave of pleasure echoing down the mental link that they had shared since Roland had become Turpin’s student. It had been two years since Turpin had claimed Roland as an apprentice Warden. It had been slightly over a year and a half since Roland had gently, patiently, but very determinedly gotten his way, and had become Turpin’s lover. That, to Turpin’s mind, was far more dazzling than any spell he’d ever known.

“I haven’t been practicing, either,” Roland said, his voice low. “Not much. I haven’t had someone to practice with. So I wanted to work on that cloak spell that you taught me.”

“You mastered that spell the first time I showed it to you,” Turpin replied, puzzled. “I would say that you mastered it faster than any apprentice Warden ever has.”

“But I’m not sure if I can maintain it while distracted.” Roland looked up at him and grinned. “Want to find out?”

***

I love these two. Writing them is just plain fun.

When I can get a cranky toddler to give me the words, that is.

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Work in Progress: The White Raven, week Fourteen

Week Fourteen. The week in which a decision was made.

The White Raven will be two books. I’m committing trilogy again, because there’s just too much book here. When all is said and done on book one, the wordcount is going to be very close to my original 100K estimate. So what we have here is The White Raven, book one. Book two will come after I finish the Swords of Charlemagne books.

Now I need to come up with two titles.

The White Raven, Book One
Week Fourteen Total Wordcount

In other news, chapter 3 of Fools Rush in is live on the Forbidden Fiction website. (log in required.)

And we’ll finish this up with an excerpt. It’s been a while since I gave you anything, so here’s Lorcan in the arena. He and his companions are supposed to recreate the battle of Horatio at the Bridge — an impossible task, set up by someone who wants Lorcan dead.

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“I’m expecting a wedge,” he said as they walked back toward the bridge. “I’ve put you in positions so that you can take the sides of the wedge. Stop them however you can. The ones that get past you I’ll deal with.”
Nona nodded. “And we build a barricade with the bodies, hm? Good plan.”

Lorcan swallowed. He didn’t want to have to kill anyone today, but the chances of avoiding that were slim. “Take your places and get your helmets on. And may all of our gods smile on us.” He went back to the bridge, watched as Nona and Ennius took their places. Linus waited for Lorcan to nod, then turned and shouted.

Across the arena, the gates opened. Men started to file out, forming ranks, and Lorcan started counting.

“I thought you said thirty!” he called. “A… what did you call it?”

“A triarius,” Nona called back. “And yeah, thirty.”

“That’s more than thirty,” Lorcan muttered. He swore softly, seeing Linus striding across the sand toward the assembled forces. A big man walked to meet him — Gaius. Linus gestured broadly, clearly incensed. Gaius turned, frowned, then stalked back toward his men. His voice was loud, and it carried across the sands:

“…told you only the triarius! Who are these men? And what do you mean, making me look like a fool? And in front of my father and all of Rome? Get the rest of these men off the sands now!”

Nona trotted over to Lorcan. “Someone made a big mistake?”

“Sounds like it,” Lorcan agreed. “I wonder who?”

“Whoever is acting as Gaius’ second, I imagine,” Nona said.

“At least we know Gaius is going to play fair today,” Lorcan said. “Go on back to your place.”

Nona trotted back into position, and Lorcan licked his lips. The triarius had formed ranks — three rows of ten across — and he finally had a good look at them. Their armor wasn’t anything like what he was expecting. Nothing at all like what he’d seen in the arena, nor what he’d seen on soldiers in the city. This armor was very ornate, very fanciful — breastplates ornamented with colored enamel and helmets with ridiculous metal crests. They carried shields that were slightly rounded squares, and to Lorcan’s surprise, they wore no leg protection at all.

“Nona, what are they wearing?” he called. “That’s the most ridiculous armor I’ve ever seen!”

“Oh, they’re supposed to be Etruscans,” Nona called back. “That’s the army that was attacking Horatius.”

“Etruscans dressed like whores going to war?” Lorcan called back, incredulous. He’d forgotten that there were more than just his men that could hear him, and that his voice would carry to the first rows of spectators, who roared with laughter. The laughter spread like waves through the crowd, as his words were repeated from seat to seat.

“Oh, they’ll be saying that for weeks, “ Ennius said. “That’s a good one.”

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Work in Progress: The White Raven, week 7

This week started out strong. I made 40K words on day 46, which was the last day of NaNoWriMo… and then my forward progress slowed to a crawl. Part of it was that the bullet journal I’ve been using to track words and keep all my story notes in fell apart, and I needed to move everything into a new one. So I’ve been doing stuff that is writing related, but it’s actually writing the story. Baking starts next week (if anyone remembers my posts from last year about cookies), so I need to put some major words on the page this week.

The White Raven
Week Seven Total Wordcount

This week’s excerpt is a short one that I just wrote. Lorcan is going to make is debut in the Coliseum, and is being instructed on what to expect by the senior gladiators. Including an interesting aspect of gladiatorial life…

Excerpt:

Lorcan nodded. “Will I know who I’m fighting before?”

“It won’t matter yet,” Yaroah answered. “You won’t know any of them, and Manius hasn’t let you come see when we fight. He should have.” He frowned. “And I didn’t give it any thought, but he should have, as part of your training.”

“No matter,” Lorcan said. “I go on the sands, and I fight.”

“No, first you salute the Emperor. Or whoever of the Imperial family is in the box,” Ennius said. “If it’s not the Emperor, it’ll be Gaius. The heir. Tavi might be there, too.”

Lorcan nodded. “Salute the box, and whoever is sitting there. And then?”

“Try not to die,” Yaroah said, his voice dry. “When you beat your opponent, the Emperor decides his fate.”

Lorcan stared at him. “What?”

“If you don’t kill him right off, the Emperor might decide he needs killing, and tell you to do it.” Yaroah made a gesture with one hand. “You see that, you kill them. There’s no arguing, either. You do it, or you die with him.”
Lorcan nodded slowly. “I understand. And then?”

“Then?” Yaroah chuckled. “Then, Livia might get mad at you.”

“Why?” Lorcan looked up at Ennius, who was… well, the only word was giggling.

“You know how they scrape the oil off of us?” Yaroah answered. “Do you know what they do with it?” Lorcan shook his head, and Yaroah grinned. “Gladiator sweat is in high demand among the high-born women, Lorcan. And if the gladiator wins, and wins well? So is he.”

Lorcan frowned. “Sweat. They want sweat. Why?”

“It’s an aphrodisiac,” Ennius answered. Lorcan looked up at him.

“I don’t know that word.”

“A sex potion, Lorcan,” Yaroah explained. “They put it into their cosmetics, and they think it makes them… I don’t know. Something.”

Lorcan blinked. He looked up at Ennius, then shook his head. “You’re making fun of me, aren’t you?”

 

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