Swords of Charlemagne

Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week 12

A very good word week indeed.

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

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I can see the end from here. There are maybe five chapters left. The book won’t be a full 100K words, I don’t think.  I’m thinking something between 80K and 90K at this point.  I’m going to go out on a limb and say draft by mid-June.

I wrote one scene this past week that I’d been waiting to write since I started the book. Not going to give that one to you, though. Not yet.  Instead, I’ll give you the fruits of my research into the macabre — the Paris Catacombs.

This was something I put on Twitter this week:

There are estimated to be six million sets of bones in the tunnels below Paris. And Douglas gets to go down there in search of (spoilers):

***

He’d keep going until full dark, he decided, and cast the spell again. It swirled around him for a moment, then led him on across the intersection, and up to a building. Douglas blinked, peered up at the sign over the door.

Entree des Catacombes

“Catacombs,” Douglas murmured. “Oh, that’s just lovely.” He shuddered, then tried the door. To his surprise, it opened easily. He stepped inside, and conjured a light, passing by a desk that he assumed usually was occupied by a clerk of some kind. At the far end of the room was a staircase leading down. He stopped, and looked around. “Map. I need a map. If these are anything like the catacombs in Rome, they go on for miles.” He searched the room until he found what he wanted — a leaflet with a rough map. He studied it and whistled. “Just like Rome,” he murmured, folding the map and slipping it into his coat. He swallowed, then started down the stone stairs, sending the light on ahead. He started counting stairs, but quickly lost count as he descended deeper and deeper underneath the streets of Paris. Finally, he reached the gallery at the bottom. There was only one way to go, and he took a deep breath before setting off down the dark tunnel. It was eerily quiet — only his footsteps and a soft, distant dripping sound. The air was damp, and cold, and there was a sickly draft. In places on the walls, there were signs set into the walls, marked with names. Street names, he realized, and wondered if the passages marked the names of the streets above him. There were others signs, these marked with numbers and letters that made no sense to him. The passage ended at a junction, and Douglas cast his seeking spell once more, taking the right turn and following the path written in dust and magic. Another long, dark tunnel, with only echoing footsteps to keep him company. There was no signs of any other living being in the tunnels, and he wondered if he’d been sent astray. No. No, this spell had never failed. And as far as he knew, there was no way to fool it, no false trail that would circumvent his ability to find who and what he wanted to find. So he kept walking, passing through a series of rooms full of the most glorious an fanciful carvings of elaborate buildings, then passing a stair that seemed to end at a well of some sort. Finally, he reached a pair of columns that flanked a door. The columns were decorated to look like crenellated towers. He passed between them, and stopped outside the door that they framed. There was a sign: Arrête, c’est ici l’empire de la mort!

“The empire of the dead,” Douglas murmured, his voice seeming unnaturally loud in the silence. “How bloody romantic.” Slowly, he passed through the door, finding another gallery on the far side, with stone pillars and a large stone carved with a long inscription. He didn’t stop to read it, but kept walking. Only to stop short as he suddenly identified the the odd pattern of the walls in the tunnels ahead of him.

The catacombs beneath Rome were orderly things. Long tunnels with niches carved along the sides, two or three high in places, and each niche occupied by at least one former Roman. Here, though… the bodies were no longer bodies. The walls here were made up of stacked bones and skulls. They were very neatly stacked, but there were no complete skeletons. No signs of which bones belonged to which skulls, or of who any of these bones had been in life.

Douglas stared in creeping horror, trying to calculate how many bodies were just in this section. There was no way to know. He swallowed and started walking again, trying not to think too hard about Parisians of the past who might have objected to having their eternal rest as being part of a wall. He knew a little about unquiet ghosts, but not nearly enough to deal with one. Nor did he have the time.

***

I’m trying to decide now if I want to take the Catacomb tour, should I ever have the chance to visit Paris. It’s supposed to be 45 minutes and cover about a mile of the I’m-not-sure-how-many-miles of catacombs.  I’m not sure though — given how much research I had to do for the chapter and a half, I might have already seen the entire tour!

I’ve decided that once this book is done, I’m going to do two things. Proofread Morrigan’s Heir, and start worldbuilding on the Elemental project. My book-plan doesn’t have me starting Ashes and Light (Swords of Charlemagne 3) until August. Given the calendar, I was thinking I’d wait until after Indie Bookfest to start.  I might just follow that schedule.

Think I can keep from working on this world for that long?

In other news, the rerelease of Tales from the Arena is in June. I don’t have a date yet. As soon as I do, I’ll let you all know!

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week 11

Remember last week I said there might be an announcement this week?

I now have a Patreon! 

I’m going to develop that Elemental project from the ground up, and start an ongoing… something. How long it will be, where it will go, all of that is stuff that we’ll discover together.

Since I’m still in the middle of Swords of Charlemagne, I set the Patreon up to be a pay-for-content, not as a monthly draw. That might change once I have a better idea of what the Elemental project is, and as it gets going. For now, now one pays anything until I produce something.

Speaking of Swords of Charlemagne,  last week I also said that I thought I’d be at the halfway mark by Wednesday?

Yeah, I didn’t make it Wednesday.

I made it Monday.

This was an uncommonly good writing week, all in all.

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

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That is, until I hit chapter seventeen.

Sex scenes slow me down. I’ve said that before. So do fight scenes.

So I, in my genius plotting brain, decided that The Lady and the Sword must have a fight scene that segues right into a sex scene. Because reasons.

It came together a lot faster than I though it would, because I had a lot of it in my head already. So here’s a bit of the unedited scene:

***

Douglas frowned slightly. He opened his mouth, but whatever he was going to say was lost as Mystere’s fist connected with his chin. Douglas stumbled backwards, regained his footing, and stared at Mystere like he’d lost his mind.

“I… you hit me!”

“Are you ready to listen now?” Mystere asked.

The answer quickly became obvious — Douglas charged at Mystere, roaring like a bull. Until that moment, Mystere would never have expected his Doogie to be a brawler. But clearly, there was a history there that Mystere had missed.

Also clearly? Punching Douglas to get his attention was probably not the smartest thing that Mystere had ever done in his lifetime. Douglas was both taller and heavier than he was, and Mystere quickly found himself in over his head. He refused to use magic, even though that would have stopped Douglas easily. No, there was something here. Something visceral that needed doing. Magic would only get in the way. He ducked too slowly, caught a fist in the cheek, and stumbled back. Panting, anger shredded any semblance of clear thought — Mystere rushed Douglas, bowling him over. He skipped backwards, watching, his back against the bedroom door. Douglas got to his feet, an odd grin on his face. He rubbed one fist with the other hand, and Mystere heard Douglas’ knuckles crack. His stomach dropped, and he fumbled at the door handle.

“Douglas, I shouldn’t have done that—” he stammered. Too late — Douglas rushed at him again, the force of his attack driving Mystere back into the door so hard that the frame shattered, and both men fell into the bedroom. Mystere landed hard, but managed to use his elbow to knock Douglas back, to get his weight shifted enough that Mystere could move. He rolled, kicking Douglas by accident as he tried to give himself some room to either fight or flee. But Douglas was faster than Mystere thought, and grabbed the back of Mystere’s waistcoat, dragging him back with enough force that the cloth tore. Mystere yelped as Douglas threw him bodily onto the bed, diving after him. The bedframe collapsed under them, pitching them at an odd angle — Mystere with his head pointed toward the floor, completely pinned down and unable to get out from underneath Douglas’ greater weight. He thought for a moment about throwing Douglas off with magic, but decided not to struggle. This was no longer about winning. It was about understanding. And it was time for Douglas to do… something.

He wasn’t expecting that something to be Douglas kissing him as if both their lives depended on it, hard enough that their teeth ground together. Mystere couldn’t speak, couldn’t move, even as Douglas tore at his clothes to bare the skin beneath. There had always been passion between them, a deep desire. This was different. This… the Greeks had a word for this.

Katharsis.

***

There was a lot of consent juggling in this chapter. I do address the elephant in the room later in the scene.  It’s not as grim-dark as Rebel Mage. It’s more along the lines of Chapter 7 of House of Sable Locks. Maybe a little lighter, though.

Sometime next year or thereabouts, you all can tell me.

And now it’s time for me to go inside. Writing on the porch is lovely, until the mosquitoes wake up.

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week ten

So close!!!

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

 Halfway point by Wednesday, at the latest.  I’ve had a couple of really good writing days this past week, and I hope to keep that up next week.

This weekend was also the Circlet Press Author Retreat up in Boston. I’ve never been to one, although I want to go one of these years. However, this year they did some livestreaming of discussions, so my usual vicarious participation via Twitter turned into actual participation via Google Hangouts. And, for the first time ever since our working partnership started in 2009… I got to see what a Jen Blackmore looks like.  Maybe next year, I’ll get to meet her in realspace!

All right. Let’s have an excerpt. If you know anything at all about The Song of Roland, you know that Ganelon de Ponthieu, Roland’s stepfather, is a prick of the first order. I mean, anyone who sets his stepson up to die is not going to win Father of the Year, right? This, by the way, is totally not a spoiler. The real Roland died at Roncevaux in 778AD. Like the sinking of the Titanic, some things in history just can’t be considered spoilers anymore.

Here’s an example of Ganelon being a bastard:

***

The camp was alight with torches and men running, rushing to put together supplies and saddle Turpin and Olivier’s horses. Turpin waited near the king’s tent, his hand on his sword hilt, his mind ranging, searching for any trace of Roland. How far had they gotten before they’d stopped for the night? And what road had they taken? Would he be able to find them, in the dark?

“They’re riding out now? Alone?”

Turpin winced. Ganelon’s piercing voice carried clearly out of the tent in the still night air. Turpin turned his back to the tent. He did not want to deal with Ganelon now. Not while he was still raw, still frightened to his bones about what Roland’s frantic call might have meant. It hadn’t been a death call — of that he was certain. But he was also certain that wherever the camp had been, it was far outside Roland’s mental range. How had he reached so far?

“Charles, I told you he shouldn’t have been sent,” Ganelon continued.

“Ganelon, you do your son a disservice,” Charles said, his voice close enough to a growl that Turpin immediately went on guard. “He’s one of my finest—”

“One of your finest?” Ganelon scoffed. “Finest what?”

“I’m not having this, Ganelon,” Charles said. “Not now. He’s a fine warrior and you know it.”

“He’s a fine, filthy little whore, and everyone knows it!” Ganelon snapped. “He should have been sent from court in disgrace years ago.”

“He is your son, Ganelon!”

“He’s none of mine. He’s Berta’s excess baggage and Turpin’s bedwarmer.”

Turpin spun on his heel and walked into the tent. “I heard my name?” he said mildly. Ganelon paled.

“I— Archbishop—”

“Oh, I rate my title to my face, but not when I’m not around?” Turpin interrupted. “And I wonder… you seemed so eager to have me remove Roland from my side and from my tutelage earlier today, and replace him with your Baudoin.”

“Baudoin is worth ten of Roland!” Ganelon snapped. “He’s no better than his whore of a mother—”

Turpin never saw Charles move. Instead, he felt the flare of Charles’ seldom used magic as the king grabbed Ganelon by the front of his tunic and lifted the man bodily into the air. Charles was a powerfully built, physically imposing man, taller than Turpin by a handspan, taller than Ganelon by perhaps half that. Ganelon let out a frightened squeak and grabbed onto Charles’ wrist.

“You forget yourself, Ponthieu,” Charles growled. “Or do you forget that Berta was my sister?”

Ganelon gaped at him like a landed fish, and Turpin stepped forward. “Charles, put him down,” he said, reinforcing it with a mental repeat of the command.

Charles glared at him, but set Ganelon on his feet. He did not, however, release the man’s tunic. “I granted your lands and titles to you when you took Berta to wife, so that my sister and her son would never again know deprivation,” he said. “You swore to hold her son as your own. If you are now deciding to break that vow and repudiate Roland, I’m certain that I could find someone more worthy of holding those lands.” He smiled and released Ganelon’s tunic. “Roland himself, perhaps. He’s more than capable. Or had you missed the fine work he’s done on the Breton March?”

Ganelon paled, smoothing the front of his tunic. “I…”

“You are dismissed, Pontheiu,” Charles interrupted. “And when we return to Francia, it would be best of you saw to your own lands personally, until such time as you are recalled to my presence.”

“Sire, I—”

“I said dismissed, Pontheiu,” Charles growled. Ganelon’s mouth snapped shut, and he bolted like a frightened rabbit. Charles scowled after him, then looked at Turpin.

“No, you didn’t go too far,” Turpin answered the question before it was asked. “But if I may be so bold—”

“You’ll do it anyway,” Charles answered, in a voice that was closer to his usual humor.

“You should be paying closer attention to Roland and his relationship with Ganelon. The man treats him like dirt. That’s part of the reason that he took so many bed partners, I think.”

Charles frowned. “Trying to replace a father’s love with physical lust?” He sighed. “I should have paid more attention, when he was younger. But now?” He rested his hand on Turpin’s shoulder. “He has real love now, doesn’t he?”

Turpin nodded once, feeling the fear surging back. “Charles—”

“Go on. Go find him. Find them. Bring them home.”

***

In other news, I haven’t done too much with the Elemental thing this week. It’s still in the back of my brain, percolating.  I did get some answers for another thing, though. There will perhaps be an announcement this week.

Until then!

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week nine

A good week, this. I can see the halfway point from here.

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

 I’ve jumped back in time again, so I’ve spent this week writing my favorite characters. The sheer amount of giddy enjoyment I get from Turpin, Roland and Olivier is probably illegal in my home state.

So here’s some of Turpin and Olivier. A few lines of this showed up in my Twitter feed this week.

***

He (Turpin) took his midday meal with Ganelon, who asked for him to take the time to discuss methods of more effective deployment for the scouting parties. That topic was never discussed — Ganelon spent the meat casting aspersions on his step-son, slandering Roland as a degenerate wastrel who was unworthy of the Archbishop’s tutelage, all the while promoting the virtues of his own son, Baudoin and all but insisting that Turpin cast Roland aside in favor of Baudoin. Turpin came away from the meal deeply disgusted, suffering with indigestion, and with the solid certainty that Ganelon would never see his step-son as anything more than a nuisance. Turpin made note to speak to Charles about his brother-in-law — perhaps there was a border province somewhere in Charles’ realm that would be a better use of Ganelon’s talents, or at least a place for him to spray his venom as far as possible from his intended victim. Someplace in Frisia, perhaps? No… no, Frisia was entirely too close to Aachen, and Turpin liked the villa at Aachen far too much.

He walked the perimeter of the camp, thinking of geography and borders, and how they might be able to convince the Pope that the mountains of the moon were within Charles’ realm, and were therefore a perfectly logical place to send Ganelon. He was mentally composing the letter when he reached his own tent, and almost tripped on Olivier.

“Oh!” Turpin stepped back and laughed. “Olivier, I apologize. I was thinking—”

“You were leagues away is what you were,” Olivier said. “What are you thinking about, to be paying no attention? That’s not like you.”

“Thinking about how we might go about annexing the mountains of the moon for Francia.”

Olivier blinked. “I… can you do that?”

“I’ve no idea,” Turpin admitted. “But I think it might be far enough away to send Ganelon.”

Olivier blinked again. Then he looked thoughtful. He frowned, then murmured, “Tartarus.”

“What?” Turpin gasped, suddenly colder than he’d been in a very long time. “What about Tartarus?”

“Hesiod said it would take nine days for an anvil that fell from Heaven to reach the Earth. And it would take nine more days to reach Tartarus. How fast does an anvil fall? Faster than a horse travels, I should think. Is that far enough?”

Turpin swallowed. “Far enough, certainly. But I’d not sentence anyone to Tartarus. Not even Ganelon.”

“Turpin?” Olivier sounded worried. “Are you all right? You’re very pale all of a sudden.”

“An ill wind,” Turpin answered. He looked around. “Where have you been all day?”

“Thinking. Trying to get my thoughts in order. What is it that Roland says? Chasing my next thought.” Olivier smiled slightly. “He was right, this morning. I’ve been being awful.”

“Come and dine with me,” Turpin said. “And we can talk about it. Have your thoughts given you a reason for your behavior?”

“I think I’m closer than I was,” Olivier admitted. “And if you hadn’t asked me, I’d have asked you. I already spoke to the cooks.”

Turpin nodded. “Then come inside. We’ll have something to drink, and we’ll talk. You haven’t told me about your family in ages.”

He led Olivier into the tent, going to the chest where he kept his personal stores of wine.

“Shouldn’t I be doing that?” Olivier asked.

“You should be sitting,” Turpin answered. “And tell me about how things are with Gismonda and the boys.” He picked up cups and took them and a flask to the table, sitting down facing Olivier. Olivier took the cup that Turpin offered and took a sip.

“They’re doing well. When we go back to Francia, I should go and visit them. She tells me that Aquilante is getting tall, that he’ll be a tall man when he’s grown.” He smiled. “He’ll be taller than me, I warrant.”

“Your father was tall, was he not?”

“He was,” Olivier agreed. “You met him, didn’t you?”

“Once or twice only,” Turpin said. He sipped his own wine. “Years back. You would have been a little boy. Aquilante’s age, I think.”

Olivier sniffed. “Master, how old are you? Really?”

Turpin chuckled. “Old enough that I’m not even certain myself. Old enough that I should know more than I do.”

“Do we ever know everything we should know?” Olivier asked.

“Oh, I like that question!” Turpin leaned back in his chair and took a drink. “That’s very good. One could argue that we never know all we should know, because how do we know what we don’t know?”

Olivier looked as if he wanted to answer. Then he stopped and frowned. “I think I haven’t had enough wine to answer that.”

***

There are times when the writing just flows from my fingertips. This has been that kind of week. Here’s hoping for another one — I’d like to see a completed draft by the end of June.

Let’s recap the words so far —

Nine weeks, 41, 743 words.
Average of 662.5 words a day. Call it 663 words. That’s low for me, but there was Spring Break in there.

It’s ten weeks until the end of June. 76 days. If I keep my numbers at 750 words a day or more, I’ll make that deadline.

In other news, I’m still thinking of that Elemental thing, but it’s back burner for a bit. I’m scribbling things down as I think of them, but it’s very low priority. Gee, I wonder why? (looks pointedly at the calendar….)

 

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week eight

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

Slightly over a third of a book. It’s humming along nicely, and I’ve just hit The Black Moment in our Victorian era. Things are about to get interesting for them, which means it’s time for me to go back to working on the Carolingian era.

Cliffhangers are awesome.

Excerpt time. This might be the last one — it’s getting spoilery in here.

***

“Douglas, tomorrow morning, you go to the Opera house and audition for the orchestra,” Mystere said. “There’s an opening—”

“Do I want to know why there’s an opening?” Douglas asked slowly. Mystere just smiled.

“Never you mind that,” he answered. He turned to Margaret, and his smile faded. “I want you to be on the inside, too. But—”

“But I’m no singer. No dancer. No musician. What would I do?” Margaret asked.

“Do you sew?” Mystere asked. “They always need women to sew in the backstage areas.”

“I…” Margaret clasped her hands on her lap. “I sew. I took in sewing, for pin money when I was still married to Thomas. It’s… I’m not sure I still can.”

“Is that the sort of thing you can forget?” Mystere asked.

“Is that a serious question?” Margaret asked in reply. “You don’t sew?” Mystere shook his head, and Margaret blinked in surprise. “How do you mend things, then?”

“Magic,” Douglas answered. “I can do basic mending. But why can’t you, Leannan?”

Margaret got up and went to the table and her lapdesk. She opened it and took out a narrow box. “Oh, they aren’t broken!”

“Margaret? You never said you wear spectacles!” Douglas exclaimed as she put on the wire-rimmed spectacles.

“I don’t need them, usually,” Margaret said. “I can read with no issues, but fine work gives me headaches. I haven’t had time for it recently, and I haven’t even looked at them since Aachen.”

“Was that the only complication?” Mystere asked. When Margaret nodded, he smiled. “I do like them, Margaret. They’re charming. Now, Doogie, there’s a room at the boarding house where I’m staying. I want you to take that. Margaret, we’ll have to find you a place—”

“We can’t lodge together?” Margaret interrupted.

Mystere shook his head. “No, and I want you both to put your wedding rings aside for the duration of this. You cannot appear to be married.” He looked from Douglas’ shocked face to Margaret’s. “I’m sorry, but they won’t hire Margaret if they think that she’s married.”

“And you need us both inside with you,” Douglas said with a sigh. “You’re asking a great deal, Yael.”

“We can always come back here in secret,” Margaret said, moving to sit with Douglas. He took her hand and kissed it.

“I still don’t like it,” he grumbled. “Yael, how long do you think this will take? How long will we have to pretend?”

“Until we find out who is doing this, and until you can free Hauteclere. Which we shouldn’t risk until we know who is attempting to steal her and stop them.”

“And Caedda is coming, isn’t he?” Margaret added. “We have to be done quickly.”

“Exactly,” Mystere agreed. “Pack a bag each.” He stopped, closed his eyes for a moment. Then he nodded. “I need to go. I’ll see you tomorrow at the Opera. And remember. We none of us know the other, understand?”

“Of course,” Douglas answered. He sounded unhappy, and Margaret agreed with that sentiment. After all, they’d only been married just over three weeks — barely a month together, and now they were going to have to live apart indefinitely? She didn’t like that one bit. She leaned into his side, and he put his arm around her.

“It won’t be for long,” Mystere said gently. He came closer and knelt in front of them, resting his left hand on Douglas’ knee, taking Margaret’s hand in his other. “This is getting far more complicated than it should have been. If everything had gone the way it should, I’d have met you here with the sword, Douglas would have his memories, and we’d be on our way to England. I hate that I have to ask this of you.”

“It’s not your fault, Yael,” Margaret said gently. He smiled and squeezed her fingers.

“Now, tomorrow, here’s what needs to be done..”

***

Following Mystere’s instructions, Douglas left right after breakfast to engage a room at the boarding house. Margaret packed slowly, putting her older clothing into the carpet bag, along with her spectacles and a few personal items that she didn’t want to leave behind, and dressing in a slightly worn skirt and bodice. Then she went shopping, rummaging through second hand shops until she had put together a small, but serviceable sewing kit. Finally ready, she made her way to the Palace Garnier. The stage door, Mystere had told her, but it wasn’t until she was standing in front of the ornate Napoleon III building that she realized that she didn’t know where the stage door actually was. She sighed and started to walk around the building. She’d just have to find it. It had to be somewhere, after all.

As she turned the corner, a small group of women fell in behind her, laughing and chatting. One of them said something about rehearsals, and Margaret stopped and turned around.

“Excuse me,” she said. “I don’t mean to eavesdrop, but do you work here?”

One of the women, a pretty, petite blonde looked startled at the question. “We do. May I ask why?”

Margaret smiled and looked down at her bag. “I was looking for work. I was told that the Opera hires sewing women, so I came to see if there might be a place for me?”

Immediately, the women surrounded her, talking over each other as they assured Margaret that of course the Opera would hire her, the dancers always needed someone to help alter and repair costumes, and to just come with them. They started walking, chattering gently until Margaret felt as if she was surrounded by overly-friendly chickens.

“Enough!” the blonde called. “You’re frightening her. What’s your name, my dear?”

“Margaret. Margaret Forsythe.” Margaret smiled, pleased that she’d remembered the story that she and Douglas had decided on over breakfast.

“It is a pleasure, Margaret. I am Angeline Laurent. This is Julia. That is Geraldine, and this is Elise. We are all part of the corps de ballet here.”

“Thank you,” Margaret said. “You’re all very kind.”

“You are English, no?” Julia asked. “Why are you looking for work in Paris?”

Margaret sighed. “Because I had to leave England. But things are more expensive than I thought, and I’m on my last franc. I need work, and a place to stay that I can afford, so I can think of what to do next.”

The women looked at each other, and Angeline stepped closer. “Had to leave?” she asked gently.

Margaret shook her head. “It’s a long story, I’m afraid. And I don’t want to make you late.”

Angeline slipped her arm into Margaret’s. “You can tell me when you are more comfortable. And tonight, you will come with us. We lodge at a women’s only boarding house. The landlady is a former dancer, and she understands.”

“Oh!” Margaret gasped. “Oh, that… that’s so kind of you! Thank you!”

Angeline smiled. “It is how sisters should treat each other, no?”

“But you only just met me!”

“Angeline, she adopts kittens and baby birds,” Julia teased. They all laughed.

“Which am I, then? A kitten or a baby bird?” Margaret asked, setting them off again.

“You are a new friend,” Angeline declared. “Come inside. We will introduce you to the ballet master and tell him that you are our new seamstress.”

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week seven

My word counter is back!

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

Just about a third of a book. Still fussing a little with the format — where in time should it start, how much time should I spend in one era before we go to the other. Things are pretty fluid right now.

I’m trying to keep that other thing in mind and get a handle on that while working on this one — still not idea what that OTHER thing is. All I know so far is that the hero is a merman, you can tell by looking at him because you can see the marks of where his gills are on his throat when he’s in his human form, and that firemice live in the blacksmith’s forge.

All of this has nothing to do with Charlemagne. I know.

Right. Excerpt time.

***

He reached up and took her hands, drawing them down to where he could kiss both of her palms. “Margaret. My Margaret. D’ye know what your name is, in Gaelic?”

She smiled. “No, I don’t.”

“Marsaili,” he answered. “It means pearl.”

“I knew that,” Margaret told him. “It’s from the Greek, I think.”

“You don’t care for Maisie, and I understand that.” Douglas sat back on his heels, not letting go of her hands. “Might I call you Marsaili? When we’re alone?”

She moved to perch on the edge of the chair. “You may call me Marsaili whenever you like. I like it, and I like the sound of you saying it. Just between us?”

“A secret name. Just for us.”

She giggled. “All right. Do I get a secret name just for you?”

He looked thoughtful. “I can’t think of another name I’d answer to, other than Doogie.”

“Do you have a second name?”

He blinked. “Do you? I never asked. And I don’t remember if you wrote it on the marriage certificate.”

“I do, but I’ve never cared for it at all,” Margaret answered. “It’s Winifred.”

Douglas nodded slowly. “So… I don’t get to call you Winnie, then?”

“No, you do not. I like Marsaili. What do I call you?”

“My second name is Malcolm, but I’d rather you didn’t use it,” he shifted, letting her hands go and sitting tailor fashion on the floor in front of her. “My son was Malcolm.”

“I remember,” Margaret said. “Calling you Doctor seems very impersonal.” She frowned. “You have a clan, don’t you? Since you’re a Scot?”

“Of course. Clan Keith.”

“And don’t the clans all have animals associated with them? I should know this now, shouldn’t I? Since I’m Clan Keith by marriage?”

“Clan Keith has a badger,” Douglas answered. “Where are you going with this?”

Margaret laughed. “A badger? That’s perfect. And the Scottish word for badger is what?”

Douglas smiled. “It’s broc. Is that what you’ll be calling me now?”

“Broc? If you like it. I think it suits you.” Margaret smiled.

“How so?” Douglas asked.

“In the stories of Reynard the Fox, Badger is Reynard’s cousin. He’s a philistine, which doesn’t suit you at all. But he also loves his home, his family, and he loves his comforts. And don’t surprise him, because he can be quite dangerous.” Margaret was rewarded with a real smile.

“I think I like it.” He shifted around until he was kneeling once more. “We’ve a day or two, don’t we?”

“That’s what Yael said,” Margaret answered.

“They, my lovely Marsaili,we’re going to use that time to our advantage,” Douglas said. He got to his feet and held his hand out to Margaret. “Go dress to go out,” Douglas said. He got to his feet and held his hand out to Margaret.

“Out? Out where?” She took his hand and let him pull her to her feet. To her surprise, he pulled her closer, holding her to him with one arm while he brushed her hair back with his other hand.

“Well, I’m realizing that I barely know you,” Douglas said. “And, since hope that we’ll be married for a very long time, I should get to know you better. And you should know me. So I want you to show me Paris, the way you see it. You’ve spent a lot of time in this city, yes?”

“Yes,” Margaret agreed. She rested her hand on Douglas’ chest. “Does that mean we’re courting?”

“We’re a little backwards, but yes. We should have done it sooner, but we were distracted. Now, he’ll call us in a day or two, and until then, we’ll come to know each other.” He looked so earnest, so eager for her approval, that she had to smile. She went onto her toes and kissed Douglas gently on the lips.

“I like that. Let me go change.”

They took supper in a restaurant near the Louvre that Margaret had always gone to with her father, then she took him walking along the Seine.

“Tomorrow, we’ll see the Louvre,” she told him, taking his arm. “And anything else you want to see. The Tower, perhaps?”

“You decide,” Douglas answered.

That set the tone for the next day, and the day after that. They toured the Louvre, and had coffee and pastries in the pâtisserie in the Eiffel Tower. As they strolled through the Champ de Mars, Douglas flagged down a flower seller, and presented Margaret with a single red rose.

“I like this courting business,” Margaret said, taking his arm. He laughed, and she marveled at how relaxed he seemed.

“I’m enjoying it,” he said. “Shall we do this often, Marsaili?”

“Courting?” Margaret sniffed her rose. “Yes, please. I’m feeling very spoiled right now.”

“Shall I spoil you further?” he asked. She smiled, and he led her toward the street and one of the many horse-drawn carts for hire there.

They entered their suite, and no sooner had Margaret locked the door behind them then Douglas had come up behind her and wrapped his arms around her.

“Shall I spoil you further?” he repeated. “In the bedroom?”

 

 

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, Week Six

My word counter broke.  I went to go and grab the code so I could update it, and discovered that the site where the image originates is gone. I’ve been using that word count code for practically my entire novel writing career.

Time for a change, I suppose.

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

26953 / 100000 (26.95%)

Official a quarter of a novel, and things are coming along nicely. This past week was a little slow, because of Spring Break, but we go back to school tomorrow, and my wordcount will go back up accordingly.

My brain tried to feed me a new plotbunny this week, and I’ve been successful in telling it to knock that off, I’m busy. But I’m going to have to file that one, once I can figure out what the story is. All I have are a couple of characters, a watercat named Melody and a firemouse named Trinket.

Yes, I had those two first, if you’re interested.

In other news, I found out this week that I’ll be a guest at Necronomicon in Tampa in October. I’m looking forward to that — I’m always been meaning to get to that convention, but it’s never worked out.

Right. let’s have an excerpt:

“What did you do?” Mystere asked as Douglas came out into the sitting room. “Are you coming up with original spells?”

“I needed to get Margaret into bed. Which meant undressing her without waking her. So, I made her float.” Douglas dragged the other chair over to face Mystere. “Now, it’s your turn. Strip. I want to see how badly you’re hurt.”

“Very nice. Very smooth usage of power, as well. And yet you still insist you’re a piss-poor mage?” Mystere sipped his brandy slowly. “Never mind me. I’ll be fine, Doogie.”

“Yael,” Douglas growled. “Take your damned clothes off.”

Mystere looked at him, and grinned. “Oh, Doogie. You have a way with your lovers, don’t you?” He drank some more brandy, then stood up and took his topcoat off. “Part of my problem is that I’ve forgotten, I think, how to deal with multiple opponents. It’s been a very long time since I’ve done so magically.” He took off his waistcoat, then tossed down his braces and starting undoing the buttons on his shirt. “I haven’t looked myself, to be honest,” he said as the shirt joined his waistcoat. “I haven’t had the privacy.”

“Where have you been sleeping, then?” Douglas asked. “Or have you not been?”

Mystere smiled slightly. “I’ve been running on my old habits, I’m afraid,” he said. “I know you don’t approve.”

“It’s unnatural, to go without sleep for days at a time,” Douglas said. “I know you can, but you always pay for it later. You have to sleep.”

“I think I’m paying for it now,” Mystere said with a groan. He sat down and took off his boots, then rose once more and shoved his trousers down. “To the skin, Doogie?”

“Yes, I want to see how badly you’re hurt. Once I’m done, if you want to get clean, there’s a nice standing shower. I’ve heard of them, but this is the first I’ve tried, and I like it. I want one for the townhouse,” Douglas said. “And there’s a good, deep tub.”

“I might take you up on the both of those.” A few minutes later, Mystere was stripped naked, and Douglas could see how much weight he’d lost, which only made the bruises and welts that crossed his skin that much more prominent. He winced as Mystere turned in a slow circle.

“Yael, you look as if you lost a fight with a train!”

“Honestly, Doogie, I feel that way.” Mystere looked down at himself. “It was a mistake to come here alone.”

Douglas rose. He rested his hand gently on Mystere’s shoulder and peered at the worst of the welts, parallel stripes that looked like the marks of a whip. “Why did you?” he asked. “Why leave us behind?”

Mystere sighed. “I had two reasons, really. The first was because I thought it would be good for you both to have some privacy. What I told you in Aachen. You deserved to have something of a honeymoon.”

“Which we have had, when we weren’t worrying about you,” Douglas said. He ran a gently finger over a bruise, saw Mystere wince. “Does it hurt to breathe or laugh?”

“I’ve not been doing much laughing since I left you. And no. I think it’s a deep bruise only. No broken ribs.”

“No, but perhaps bruised ones. We’ll treat it the same. What was the other reason?”

Mystere turned to face him, and Douglas straightened. “I needed time,” Mystere said softly. “To absorb this. I wasn’t ready. Honestly, I don’t know how I could have been ready. I was surprised enough, to find you. Having the both of you return to me, it was something I’d never even considered. And to find out that you could regain your memories, that you should remember our first lives together, and our first love, as I do? That was… I needed some time to believe that. I made a horrible mistake in leaving you. I’m sorry.”

Douglas sighed. “It’s done. I accept the apology, and I forgive you. You had good reasons.” He looked Mystere up and down, then leaned down and kissed him gently. “You’re far too thin. You haven’t been sleeping. You haven’t been eating, either. Have you?”

“Not so you would notice,” Mystere admitted. “I’ve gone practically feral. I’ll have that shower. Then perhaps a soak. Could you order up a light supper for me, do you think? You know what I prefer.”

“Of course. I’ll ring while you’re in the bath. Enough for all of us — we haven’t eaten either.” He rose and held out his arm. “Come on. I don’t want you to fall again.”

Mystere scowled at him. “I won’t. I overexerted myself with the portal. That’s all.”

“Sounds to me as if you’ve been doing that since you got here. Not sleeping, not eating. Living in the clothes you left us wearing. I should burn those. You shouldn’t have left us, Yael.”

“No, I shouldn’t have,” Mystere agreed. “I need you. I need you both. And I missed you both.”

Douglas escorted Mystere into the bath, where Mystere coughed. “That’s a standing shower? It looks like a cage.”

“The water comes at you from all sides,” Douglas said. “And from above. Did you decide anything?”

“What?” Mystere looked up from where he was looking at the knobs in the shower enclosure. “Decide anything about what?”

“You went away so you could settle your brain on what had happened. Any insights on why this is happening now?”

Mystere nodded slowly. “Show me how to use this. Is the water cold?”

“Warm,” Douglas answered. “Stand inside.”

Mystere arched an eyebrow, then moved into the shower enclosure. Douglas started the water running, setting the temperature. Then he pulled the curtain around so that Mystere was hidden from view. “Now turn that middle knob.”

There was a squeak, then a yelp as Mystere was doused with water from all directions. “Can I make the water warmer?” he called.

“Turn the left hand knob.”

A moment later, Douglas heard a sigh. “Oh, there’s something to this after all. Yes. I did.” The curtain twitched, and Mystere peered out. “I’m of two minds.”

“Well?” Douglas asked. Mystere disappeared back into the shower.

“First? I don’t care why. What I told you in Aachen? That’s still true. I have you both back in my life, and I don’t care for the reasons.”

“And what’s the second?” Douglas asked.

“The second,” Mystere repeated. There was a long silence. “The second has me terrified to my bones.”

“Yael?”

“For a thousand years, there’s been no need for a Warden. For a thousand years, whatever the Wardens were created to guard the world from has been gone. Now, it’s back. And now…” He looked out from the curtain again. “Now whatever it is, it’s coming, and it’s coming very soon. There can be no other reason.”

“Reason?” Douglas asked. “Reason for what?”

“Normally, I’d find the Wardens when they reached maturity, and I’d train them from the beginning, from the time that their gifts awoke. From their infancy, as it were. There was time. There was always time, because there were always older Wardens to guard while I trained the young. Now… something is coming, and there’s no time to train a new Warden from infancy. Something is coming, and the threat of it is enough for the Almighty to drag from their well-deserved rest in Paradise two of the finest Wardens I have ever trained, and have them reborn with their memories obscured but intact.” The water turned off, and Mystere opened the curtain. “That, Doogie, is what terrifies me.”

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, Week Five

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

Five weeks in, just about a quarter of a book done. I’m pretty pleased with how things are going. This week was a better word week, even though during a routine repair, our local power company managed to fix the junction box that supplies our house so well that we lost power for seven hours instead of the two to four hours that we were told to expect.

Skilled technicians, my arse.

That being said, I made up for it the next day, and I’m now ahead of where I should be… just in time for Spring Break. Tune in next week to see if I make my words!

Let’s have an excerpt. It’s getting harder to find excerpts for this book that won’t be spoilers for book one. I think this one will work, and I like indignant!Mystere.

***

Margaret fell in next to Douglas and followed Mystere up the stone steps and into the church. There was a definite sense of the familiar; Margaret had been to Chartres with her father, and they’d spent weeks here studying the legends of the Virgin’s chemise, a relic that was supposedly given to Charlemagne by the Empress Irene, and then given to the church by Charlemagne. That part of the story was a complete fabrication, her father had told her — the relic had actually been given to the church by Charles’ grandson, long after Charlemagne’s death. Privately, he’d told Margaret that he thought half the allure of that particular relic was the titillation factor — the story told that it had been the Virgin’s undergarment, and therefore had been in contact with her bare skin. Regardless, the belief in it had turned Chartres into a major pilgrimage site. She paused just inside, letting her eyes adjust to the dim light of the candles. She heard Mystere and Douglas coming toward her, and out of habit, she turned to the right toward the southern aisle.

“Margaret, where are you going?” Mystere asked. She turned back.

“Were we not going toward the altar?” she asked.

Mystere looked puzzled. “We are, but why are you going that way?”

Margaret blinked. “Because I was taught not to walk on the labyrinth,” she answered. “You weren’t?”

For the first time in either of her memories, Mystere looked blank. “I’m not certain what you mean, darling.”

She walked back to the men, and called a globe of light to her hand, setting it afloat over their heads. Then she pointed to the pattern on the floor. “The labyrinth. Yael, have you never walked the labyrinth?”

Mystere walked forward, up to the edge of the scalloping that encircled the massive pattern laid into the floor. “I never have. I don’t remember even seeing it the last time I was here. But I didn’t come in the usual way, so I might not have.” He knelt, touched the stones. “This is something like the devil’s thumb in Aachen, isn’t it?”

“I’m not sure,” Margaret answered, walking over to stand with him. “Pilgrims walk the pattern, and use it for prayer and meditation. I’m told it’s a substitute for a pilgrimage to Jerusalem, but Father said there was another reason behind it. That it mimics the mythic path to the underworld. Spiritual rebirth, he called it.”

Mystere looked up. “Pagan nonsense? In Chartres?”

Margaret laughed. “How many church rituals now were pagan nonsense when we were first on this earth, Turp?” she countered. He smiled and stood up, brushing his hands on his coat.

“Douglas, what do you think?” he asked, turning. He stopped and frowned. “Doogie?”

Margaret turned and looked, realizing for the first time that Douglas had vanished. “Douglas?”

“Up here,” Douglas called from somewhere near the front of the cathedral. “Come and see.”

Margaret looked at Mystere, who shrugged. Then he looked down. “Don’t walk on it?”

“Father said walk around it unless you were walking with a purpose.”

“Then we’ll walk around.” He took Margaret’s arm, and they went down the northern aisle toward the apse. Ahead, Margaret could see another globe of light, and Douglas. He was looking up at one of the stained glass windows. She frowned, then realized what he was looking at.

“You found the Charlemagne window!”

“The what?” Mystere gasped. Margaret just looked at him.

“You’ve been here, you said!”

“Yes, but—” He shook his head. “Never mind. It’s complicated. What is this window?”

“It’s beautiful,” Margaret answered. “And it tells the stories…” she stopped. Stopped talking, and stopped walking. Mystere stopped and turned to face her. “This is going to be very odd,” she said softly. “The last time I looked at this was before I knew.”

“Now you can show me,” Mystere said, his voice gentle. “Am I in the window, too?”

Margaret took his arm and started walking again, thinking. “I…no, I don’t believe so. No.”

Mystere sniffed. “I’m insulted. I was by his side for most of his life, you’d think I’d rate a few bits of colored glass.”

Margaret giggled. “You’d have to complain to the furriers, then. But they’re all six hundred years dead now, so it really won’t matter to them.”

 

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, Week 4

Bit of an upside down week. I’m a bit methody — I like things to happen when they’re supposed to happen, and I don’t like unexpected schedule changes. This week we had both. I still got my words in, though.

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

Here’s this week’s excerpt. Jump ahead to 1898 for a reunion between our “modern” heroes. Yes, it’s short.  It’s later than I like, and I’ve another upside down week this week (including scheduled maintenance on the local power lines that mean we’ll be without power for at least four hours on Tuesday morning.)

***

Douglas was quiet as they got off the train. He held on to Margaret’s hand, and even smiled at her. But there was something brittle around the edges of that smile, something ominous about the silence.

“Doogie, I wish you’d tell me what was wrong,” Margaret murmured, her voice pitched for his ears along. “Have I done something?”

Douglas shook his head. Then he nodded his head. “There he is,” he said. Margaret craned her neck, but couldn’t see over the crowd. Douglas took her arm and steered her in the right direction. Then the crowd parted, and she saw Mystere. He was standing near the wall, his hands in the pockets of his ridiculous long coat, looking as dark and as dangerous as ever. And absolutely wonderful.

“Yael,” Douglas called. Mystere saw them and smiled, coming to meet them.

“Oh, I’ve missed you,” he said. He embraced Margaret, kissed her on the cheek, then turned to Douglas, who offered his hand. Mystere blinked, looked down at the hand, then up at Douglas. “Have I done something wrong, that I don’t get a warmer welcome?”

“We’re in public,” Douglas murmured.

“We’re in France,” Mystere answered. “It’s not illegal here. And I frankly don’t care if it is. I’ve been alone for weeks now, for the first time in ten years, and I’ve missed you, you great bloody giant.”

For the first time since Margaret woke on the train, she saw Douglas smile. He passed the carpetbag to Margaret, then enveloped Mystere in a tight embrace.

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Work in Progress: The Lady and the Sword, week 3

So, my muse is a toddler. I can say this with good authority, being that I had one of those.

Me: “Okay, it’s time to write!”

Muse: “Yay! Vampires!”

Me: “What? No. No vampires. Not yet.”

Muse: “No vampires?”

Me: “No. Roland and Turpin. You like them, right?”

Muse: “Want vampires!”

Me: “Vampires later. Roland now.”

Muse: “Donwanna…”

In other words? This week has been a bit of a slogfest. I’m a little behind where I should be, but not too terribly much.

The Lady and the Sword
Swords of Charlemagne, Book 2

And, I happily have enough written that I can give an excerpt!

***

Turpin looked up from the book he was reading — he’d dragged a chair out of his tent to sit in a honeysuckle-scented breeze. June in Pavia was really quite pleasant. Not too warm. Not too cold. The spring rains were over, and the hills and forests were lush and green, alive with birds and flowers. Somewhere off in the distance, he could hear swordplay and the laughter of young men. Yes, it was quite nice.

It would be even better if they weren’t encamped outside the walls, with the city under siege. He closed the book and sighed, rubbing his forehead. Somewhere in that city was Desiderius, the father of Charles’ former wife. The man had never struck Turpin as being an idiot, but he had to have known that Charles, as devout as he was, would raise his armies in answer to a threat to the Pope. Which brought them to Pavia. They’d been chasing Desiderius across Italy, and now there was a chance of ending this. If they managed to last longer than the town, that was.

“Turp!”

Turpin turned in his chair and smiled as the dark-haired young man came toward him. “No swordplay for you, my student?”

“Bored with it,” Roland answered as he came to sit on the ground at Turpin’s feet. He leaned his shoulder against Turpin’s knee and looked up. “I finished the reading you gave me. Read it twice. I don’t really understand it, though. Do you have another treatise I can read that might explain it?”

“Did you discuss it with Olivier as I instructed?” Turpin asked. Roland didn’t answer. Instead, he tipped his head against Turpin’s thigh.

“I didn’t, Master,” he admitted. But there was something more.

Roland? Is there a problem?” Turpin asked silently.

I don’t know. I know you told me to talk to Olivier, that he could share his insight. And I tried. I did. I think he’s avoiding me. And when he can’t avoid me, he won’t answer my questions,” Roland answered. “He’s very polite, but asking him anything about our studies is like asking a wall.” He paused, then sighed. “It feels like— like the end of some of the relationships I’ve had. Someone who wants me gone, or wants to be gone, but doesn’t know how to tell me.

“It’s not his to say,” Turpin said aloud. “And I’ll tell him that myself. When did this start?”

Roland swallowed and looked up. “It started before we left Francia.”

“And you didn’t say anything?”

“I thought it was something I’d done. That I could fix it.”

Turpin nodded. “You were going to say something else. You compared it to the end of a relationship, but that’s not what you were going to say.

The way that Olivier has started treating me feels the same as the way that Ganelon has acted towards me my entire life.” Roland’s mental voice was small, and pain-filled. “I don’t understand why.”

“Nor do I. But I’ll find out,” Turpin said. He frowned, thinking. Olivier had been more quiet than usual since the Frankish army had answered the Pope’s call. He’d been spending less time in Turpin’s tent, discussing his lessons and reading the books that he needed to advance his studies as a Warden. And his presence as Turpin’s aide had become a much more infrequent thing. Turpin had dismissed it at the time — they were further from home than his students had ever been, and he’d assumed that Olivier was missing his wife and his sons. But now he wondered if that was all. “I’ll talk to him,” he said. He reached out and rested his hand on Roland’s head, then gently stroked his hair. Roland shivered, a wave of pleasure echoing down the mental link that they had shared since Roland had become Turpin’s student. It had been two years since Turpin had claimed Roland as an apprentice Warden. It had been slightly over a year and a half since Roland had gently, patiently, but very determinedly gotten his way, and had become Turpin’s lover. That, to Turpin’s mind, was far more dazzling than any spell he’d ever known.

“I haven’t been practicing, either,” Roland said, his voice low. “Not much. I haven’t had someone to practice with. So I wanted to work on that cloak spell that you taught me.”

“You mastered that spell the first time I showed it to you,” Turpin replied, puzzled. “I would say that you mastered it faster than any apprentice Warden ever has.”

“But I’m not sure if I can maintain it while distracted.” Roland looked up at him and grinned. “Want to find out?”

***

I love these two. Writing them is just plain fun.

When I can get a cranky toddler to give me the words, that is.

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